Neil

By the writer describing Neil's face so precisely it created a mood that helps make the reader feel like they are actually there and participating in all that happen with Neil. Without their details on his face most of hid personality would be lost giving the whole paper a very boring description of the event. The writer helped their description by making a beginning middle and end to the event. Next to describing his face the quotes in the paper gave a more personal experience in reading the paper. It gave a really dominant impression of who he really is though the quotes. Also the small details of the setting help give why he was acting how he was giving the reader more information on Neil and showing who he is.